Number 28 plan board.

Hello viewers again! This is the plan board of the Number 28 post I did. Here is the screen shot of it:

Fixing up sentences. Number 28.

Hi everybody! It is I Jack.
This post is about my group called the Ambulance Officers. It is a writing group. Yesterday (Wednesday 25th of September 2019) my group did a fixing up sentences. My group had to take the boring sentence and make it to a kinda longer but better story.

 Here is the boring one : He was really big. People were scared. His big body walked down the street.

Here is mine: Slowly walking to a small village, there was a strong night sky black and silver metal humongous robot. All the people in the town were terrified because they could not do anything to the robot. Its name was Number 28, and we knew because it said on its arm. The robot was gigantic, but it stopped walking for some reason. When it got closer to the small town, we saw its eyes and they were as big as Richard’s car’s steering wheel. Its eyes were rose red, and it started to spin its head around like a scary horror movie. It looked like it was scanning, to see if he can see its target. After it did a whole 360 degrees spin with its head, it started stomping away from the small town. It was like he was searching for something, but it was not there.

The story was called 28 because there was I giant robot that went to a small village. It was called 28.
I hope you enjoyed this post. Thank you!
And good bye.

Fact file Your Choice (my parents)

Hello everybody to another post of your choice everyday heroes activity. All the post of the your choice button is kinda short because there was only like a few of must does. Please comment if I did a mistake,
but you don't have to. This is a fact file but it's not that long like the others.
Enjoy!

Genial.ly of everyday heroes. Your choice!

Hello viewers! This is Jack again back here with some everyday heroes again.
This is the button (Your Choice). This is a Genial.ly and the theme is my parents.
They are heroes to me, and that's the end of story.
Here is the Genial.ly

Your choice everyday hero. Story

Want to know who my everyday hero choice
is? Well it’ my parents. 

My mom cooks for us, and she works very hard to earn money
for the family. My dad works super hard like my mom those,
and he supports the family any way he can. 

Both my parents support our big family, and always
takes care of us when were unwell. Even though nobody
really knows my parents are heroes, but still they are heroes
in my eyes. 

Story: Every other day (or if she has her off days)
my mum goes to work for a sleepover because she takes
care of the disabled people. My dad works as an ASB
bank  worker in St Lukes mall, and he always has time
to take care of the family every time he comes from work.
Everytime when my mom is home
I always see her cook meals for the whole family,
and her cooking are always tasty. My mom always takes
care of the little children like me, and the others all the time.
Everytime I come home from school, or something else, my
mom always greets us when we come home. In the morning
my dad wakes me up for school, and he also gets ready for
his work. My dad is the person who takes us to school mostly.
I would say they are great parents to me, and maybe others
would say the same. To me they are heroes, and I don’t care
what other people say about my parents unless they are nice
comments.

Do you guys think your parents are heroes? I think mine are.
I hope you enjoyed. Bye!

Jean Batten Story Board, and with Stewie Batten the girl.

Hi viewers. How are you guys? Anyway this post is about another storyboard but this is about Jean Batten because I already did Sir Edmund Hillary. Feel free to comment if you want to, and also tell me if I did something wrong. Thanks, and I hope you enjoy!
Blog ya later! -Jack