Sir Edmund Hillary sick sentence. (Not about Sir Edmund)

Sick Sentence.

The man walked up the slope. He used poles. The sun was bright.
The sky was blue.
He looked forward to the view from the top.

Fixed by me 

The tall man walked slowly up the giant slope. He used his poles to get to the top. The Sun was super bright and BURNING HOT. When the traveler looked up, it was just filled with a blue sky. The traveler looked excited for the amazing view from the top of the mountain.